Bleach Mythologies: Sui-Feng (fanfic, 18+)

Prologue

I don't even know what to tell you about this other than it's the byproduct of way too much Mortal Kombat and not enough YoruSoi. And that's it's spiraled out of control so now there is going to be a Yoruichi-centric sequel now. Because why should Sui-Feng get to have all the fun?

If it's following this idea, then it's definitely going to be interesting, but I am curious as to how you're going to develop it, if (and I'm probably wrong here) Cyborgs are not really people any more, and can only accept orders. I mean, in terms of her interaction with other people (let alone Yoruichi) I am eager to see how it turns out.

In other words, I'm looking forward to any and all sequels you may write

kittenable wrote:

If it's following this idea...

You know, sometimes the internet ruins all of the fun.

Anyway, I've uploaded Chapter 1 for you all to read and be amazed by. And here is Chapter 2. Yoruchi's in it, so I guess there's that.

I'm making a deliberate effort to write this story in a different style then the ones I've done before and I'm wondering if you all are picking up on that. And if you are, I'm wondering what you think of it.

Interesting. I wonder if Yoruichi will eventually come around.

CaptainYoruichi wrote:

Interesting. I wonder if Yoruichi will eventually come around.

Come around? To the idea Sui-Feng being a robot, or just robots in general?

Both? Or to taking over the squad. I know it's a Sui-Feng fic but most reasons to have more Yoruichi is fine with me.

Well, you'll certainly be getting more Yoruichi next chapter (I have to set up her squeal, after all). Don't know if it'll fall under your "most reasons" though.

I thought you might say that. True story: I had initially put "any reason" and then, knowing you, I amended it.

Hey guys! Remember this!

Chapter 3

The final chapter is up! Holy shit that took a long time.

CaptainYoruichi wrote:

Hey now, at least there wern't any scarecrows involved.

Yoruichi will (hopefully) get her shot in the squeal, don't you worry. Who knows, she may even get to make a wish.

I guess since it's based on Mortal Kombat I can't be surprised, but that was a pretty brutal ending.

How is she going to be in the sequel? You can't really make a cyborg out of someone who disintegrated. Also, judging by cyborg Sui-Feng's actions, a Yoruichi cyborg would not be Yoruichi anyway, so I don't know that it makes any difference whether she's in a sequel or not.

Dying's never stopped anybody in Mortal Kombat. The elder Sub-Zero kills Hanzo Hasashi, he comes back as Scorpion. Scorpion kills the elder Sub-Zero, he comes back as Noob Saibot. Shang Tsung kills Liu Kang, he comes back as Zombie Liu Kang.

She won't be a Cyborg though. I'm going to be patterning her after Noob Saibot.

Or, I could have a grief stricken Urahara try to make a new Yoruichi, and have things go wrong and he makes bloodthristy killbeast instead...Damnit, now I have to choose.