Unless all you guys start talking about how awesome this fic is, I'm going to have to give it a pass. Minor irks aside, I'm just really kind of tired of reading stuff that centers around Sui-Feng.
She a fairly well defined character, so there's very little that can be done to make stuff about her or from her perspective new or interesting without taking her out of character. I would much rather read about an author's interpretation of Yorucihi, especially if they are as serious about this fic as they claim.