For real this time; Shattered!

With the rewrite of Shatter, I decided to go ahead and delete the old version entirely and put the revised version up under a slightly new title.

It is now called Shattered.

Soldier can tell you I went through about three revisions of chapter 2 alone. But for what it's worth, I am quite happy with how it turned out.

Now, onto chapter 3. Hopefully it won't take as much time as the rest did.

CaptainYoruichi wrote:

Soldier can tell you I went through about three revisions of chapter 2 alone. But for what it's worth, I am quite happy with how it turned out.

It's true, that happened.

I'm being totally impartial and in no way influenced by the fact that I was at least partially responsible for this rewrite, but I already like the new direction. It feels much stronger and focused than before.