CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: For real this time; Shattered! Wed May 09, 2012 8:38 pm | |
| With the rewrite of Shatter, I decided to go ahead and delete the old version entirely and put the revised version up under a slightly new title. It is now called Shattered. Soldier can tell you I went through about three revisions of chapter 2 alone. But for what it's worth, I am quite happy with how it turned out. Now, onto chapter 3. Hopefully it won't take as much time as the rest did. | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: For real this time; Shattered! Thu May 10, 2012 12:58 am | |
| - CaptainYoruichi wrote:
- Soldier can tell you I went through about three revisions of chapter 2 alone. But for what it's worth, I am quite happy with how it turned out.
It's true, that happened. I'm being totally impartial and in no way influenced by the fact that I was at least partially responsible for this rewrite, but I already like the new direction. It feels much stronger and focused than before. | |
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