With the rewrite of Shatter, I decided to go ahead and delete the old version entirely and put the revised version up under a slightly new title.
It is now called
Shattered.
Soldier can tell you I went through about three revisions of chapter 2 alone. But for what it's worth, I am quite happy with how it turned out.
Now, onto chapter 3. Hopefully it won't take as much time as the rest did.