Mr Khan Hollow
Posts : 96 Join date : 2012-02-01 Location : Source of the Sun
| Subject: Re: VividBlues, mostly T and fluffy Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:21 pm | |
| - Anil wrote:
And I just have to say it again, I loved your last update. There are things that I would have done differently, but not better. The only thing I find that might be not well explained is why Yoruichi simply didn't become a Fon. They are nobles too, right? So she wouldn't have to give anything up. But there probably is an explanation for that, and it really doesn't matter to me, I liked the way it turned out better. There is a use for everything Soi Fon asked for, which factors into the use for the other things she asked for (except the bridal dowry. That's just money). I do have a bit of regret that i did not incorporate Soi's family (at least her parents) into it, but the whole thing ran too long as it was. | |
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