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PostSubject: Vampire's Pet   Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:52 pm

My second YoruSoi FF. Kinda crappy by my own standards but you all can decide. Chapter's get better with time so patience is required for them. Here's Chapter 1. Feedback and reviews welcome and I apologize for any spelling errors.


Sitting in a tree just outside of the sanctuary of the dark hell she calls a home sat a beautiful, dark skinned woman with long purple hair tied into a high pony tail. She wore black, skin tight leggings and a black tank top. She exhaled slowly and watched her breath wisp away. It seemed to be late Winter as small patches of snow still covered the ground. Her golden eyes glistened in the moon light as she waited for word that the counsil meeting was starting. Why did she have to attend anyway? She's the only the daughter of one out of four of the most powerful clans that lived in the fortress. She hated going to those boring meetings anyway. She would much more like to train the constantly dying soldiers or train herself to get better, not that she needed it. She heard slow foot steps approach the base of the tree. She didn't have to look down to know who it was. "Kisuke, shouldn't you be getting ready for that stupid meeting we have...?" The dark skinned woman asked, hate clearly lacing her tone. The blonde haired man chuckled.

"I heard you were trying to find them. They won't be here for another few days so come down and get ready." Kisuke said as he looked up to see that the woman didn't move at all. He sighed. "Do you want me to find Kukaku so she can shoot you down with another firework again?" The woman's eyes grew wider as she heard Kisuke shuffle his feet. She still had a scar from where the firework had ripped into her side and exploded on impact. With that, Yoruichi slipped off of the tree branch but held onto it with one hand, still scouting the path where the humans were. She nodded lightly and let go, falling to the ground and landing in front of Kisuke with her back to him. Sighing she looked behind her, bareing her trademark smile.

"Lets go then." She began walking as slowly as possible so she could at least be late for the boring recap of last weeks dreadful affairs.



Riding in a black, horse-drawn carriage sat a small girl, barely the age of 4, between her parents. She was wearing a beautiful golden kimono with pink flower like designs covering the bottom of the kimono and slowly fading to the gold background as the pattern rose. She began fiddling with the gold and pink obi that was tied around her waist, trying to untie the uncomfortable garment. Her mother grabbed her hands and began speaking in Chinese.

"Shaolin, don't do that dear. You want to look pretty for the meeting in a few days." She looked loveingly at her small daughter who only responded with a 'yes' and 'sorry mama.' Her father chuckled lightly beside her and placed a hand on her head.

"We'll get that off when we get home, ok Shaolin?" He asked Shaolin in Chinese. She only smiled at her father and leaned onto his arm for a short nap.



"What do you think on this matter, Ms. Shihoin?.... Ms. Shihoin?" Asked one of the counsil members. Yoruichi ignored them, as usual even though she could hear everything they were saying, she chose not to respond. Her father, sitting beside his daughter cleared his throat and spoke up.

"Do forgive my daughter. She's been sleeping very little lately. I told her to rest before the meeting but she told me she wouldn't wake up for it and could last until after to rest. Please do continue..." He stated firmly. He glanced at his daughter and turned to look at the counsil members again. They were discussing the arrival of the humans. Yoruichi simply sighed and stared out of the window.

'Father always makes up stories like that. Last week I got into a fight with a pack of wolves and according to him, didn't get scratched because I dispatched them so quickly. His lies won't get him anywhere...' She thought to herself. She began thinking about the humans that were coming this time to pay respect and work for her family. It was the Fon clan this time. The last group of slaves they had defied her father and were murdered on the spot by him. Yoruichi didn't have enough self control to not drain their blood from them. She wondered what the Fon's were like, how many there were of them and how old they were. Yoruichi being a vampire, she didn't age and had forgotten her vampire age centuries ago but somehow remember the age she was before she became a vampire.

She was 23 years old and it was her father whom had murdered her mother and turned his daughter. He bit her hand and as he was about to take another bite out of her neck when she kicked him off and ran away from the house. She heard her mother's screams as she left the small house. It seemed the village was standing still as she ran, only making the venom from the bite flow quicker through her veins. She bolted into the forest, ignoring the villagers protests to not enter. She heard their screams as her father came closer and closer to finding her. He was faster now and his senses were enhanced. She collapsed in pain under a tree and began screaming in agony. Her father managed to find her after her cries had stopped as well as her heart. With tears streaming down her face she looked upon her blood soaked father and ask him why he would do this. He simply smiled and said, "It's in my nature... Now it is yours too."

"Meeting adjourned!" Yamamoto, the oldest of the Elder vampires said gruffly. Yoruichi shook her head and rose from her chair and quickly escaped the room. Speeding down the halls she came to the west wing of the fortress and stopped in the semi-cirular room. She walked up to the door that sat on the right of a huge door that was bolted shut. She opened the door and swiftly closed it. Resting her back onto the door, she slid down in until she sat on the floor. She sighed and shook her head. "They are just humans. You can meet them. You won't hurt them." She stood up slowly and took a few paces deeper into the room. The room was pitch black because of the curtains that covered the window but Yoruichi could see perfectly fine. As she neared her bed she heard a quite knock. She chose to ignore the knock even though the person was persistent. There was a final, light knock and a voice mumbling 'I hope you get better, Shihoin-chan.' She heard the footsteps walk away quickly, as if the person whom they belonged to was embarassed about being there. Yoruichi gently tugged the hair tie from her hair and shook her head. Her long hair hung down to the middle of her back. Walking casually to her bed, she took off her orange jacket, threw it onto the nearest chair and lay on her bed. "Maybe a nap will do me some good..." The dark skinned beauty stated to herself as she drifted to sleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Vampire's Pet   Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:06 pm


Yeah, definitely getting an Underworld feel here. You have my interest. Please update soon. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Vampire's Pet   Wed Aug 31, 2011 5:14 pm

Vampire Yamamotos are the worst kind.

I've always wondered why, in these types of stores, Yorucihi's is always the vampire, given that she already one step away from a werewolf.

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PostSubject: Re: Vampire's Pet   Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:49 pm

Ok, Chapter 2. I liked how the escape scene worked out but i'm sure the entire chapter could've been a bit better. Enjoy?


The past three days flew by like a light breeze in the Spring. Yoruichi was sitting in the Shihoin chamber dressed in a light blue and purple kimono. It was one of her casual kimonos by the look of it and her hair was now tied in a bun with a golden hair comb with the design of an orchid flower. She sat on a velvet chair beside her father's own velvet chair but his was slightly bigger than hers. She always thought that it was to fit his ego but had never stated it out loud. The Fon family was taking longer than expected in entering the castle. Their carriages had arrived not 5 minutes ago and they seemed to be taking forever. Yoruichi was beginning to panic slightly. What if their scent made her crazy? What if she attacked and killed them? So many questions were running through her mind as her breathing became more rapid and her hands began to shake against her will. Yoruichi's father sensed his daughter's distress and placed his hand gently onto hers.

"You'll do fine, Yoruichi. I have faith in you. I can smell them from here and they don't smell very tasty..." He finished and removed his hand. He had said that to put his daughter at ease. Just what she needed, news that her soon-to-be slaves were going to smell unpleasant and she'd have to live with it. She sighed deeply and watched the doors as they began to open.


Walking through the doors in an orderly fashion was two men dressed in all black and masks covering their faces. Following them was a mid-height Chinese man and beside him his wife. Behind them was a small girl trying to catch up with them but daren't speak while she was there now. Behind the little girl were three more men in black and masked in a triangle like formation. Stopping a few paces from the stairs to the Shihoin's chairs, the group knelt in respect, except the little girl, whom was wondering why her mother and father had knelt in the first place.


Yoruichi's breath caught in her throat as the door opened and she watched the family walk in. Her eyes wandered hungrily at each person as they walked forward. She didn't even notice the little girl until they had all knelt down, only revealing her to be standing. Gulping loudly, the golden eyed Goddess gripped the arm of her chair, crossed her right leg over her left and turned her body away from the group but kept her eyes on the little girl. She was adorable to say the least and was the only one to smell delicious. Her black hair shone in the pale candle light and her kimono looked expensive. Yoruichi couldn't help but blush with embrassment. They were being so formal, she could've done the same but chose to look casual. Even her father dressed in his best clothes, leaving her the only one in the room that felt normal.

Raising his head, the little girl's father spoke. "My name is Huan Fon and this is my family. My wife, Jiao Fon, my five sons, Minzhe, Qiu, Jian, Ru and Tao Fon. And finally, my daughter, Shaolin Fon. We have come to pay respect, My Lord and Lady..." He said. Yoruichi turned hearing Huan's name and watched as his wife faltered slightly upon being called and his sons looking up and the back down to the floor. His daughter, Shaolin on the other hand, smiled upon hearing her name and giggled at how silly her family looked, kneeling like this. Yoruichi smiled at the tiny girl and turned to look back at the family. Her father, however had to break the kind and respectful mood.

"Excellent. You shall all be working for us now so I hope you packed your home away in those two tiny carriages you brought with you. You shall be living here now..." He sounded amused and smiled when the family began to whisper in Chinese to each other. Finally making a decision, Huan spoke again.

"We have no intention of living here and serving you. We only came to pay respects as we have always done and then leave tomorrow morning. That is a-" Before he could finish his sentence, Yoruichi's father was already at his throat and draining his life away. Before speeding away, of coarse, he demanded that his daughter stay so she could learn more self control. Smelling the blood drain from Huan made the purple haired beauty's mouth water. Jiao began to scream as she watched her husband get dispatched so quickly but she too was bitten into and drained by the two guards that stood on the outside of the door. The Fon sons quickly stood up and pulled a knife out of their uniform obi wrap. Yoruichi couldn't take the sight or smell of blood much longer as she watched the boys get pulled apart one by one. Jian, the last one standing told Shaolin to run somewhere before she ended up being killed too. He was quickly dispatched by the guards.

Shaolin was horrified as she watched her family die but did as she was told and ran to the door but it was locked and she was too short to reach the sliding bolt. Running away from the locked door, she became confusing as to where she was as tears filled her eyes. Running toward the chairs to try and escape the carnage, Shaolin only got so far before Yoruichi's father lunged at her. Yoruichi's eyes grew wide as her body reacted on its own and she ran to the girl, knelt down in front of her with her back to her father and protected the little Chinese girl. Her arms were wrapped tightly around Shaolin as her fathers sharp nails dug into her back and ripped down in long scratches. Yelping in pain, Yoruichi held the girl a little tighter and got a whimper in response. As quickly as the attack happened, the princess calmed down and twisted her body to smack her father away. He was flung back into a pillar, the guards ran to his side to aid him. Using this moment of confusion, Yoruichi ran to her chair and sat down in an attempt to use the secret passage behind her chair. Pushing the left side of her chair, it spun her and Shaolin into a narrow and pitch black hallway. She watched her father and the guards scramble toward the chair. Pushing her chair until she heard a distinct click of the passage locking, then she stood up with Shaolin in her arms and quickly escaped to her room.

The secret passage had ended in Yoruichi's room behind the giant mirror that stood there but was hidden from the sight of her room. She had no use for it since she had no reflection but it kept the passage door hidden which was the only reason she still had it. She dragged the mirror to the right, allowing her just enough room to get her and the girl into the room. She placed Shaolin onto her bed and then closed the mirror door. She began pacing back and forth, breathing heavily and occasionally growling. At this point, Shaolin was already bawling in an annoying child-like, high-pitched cry. Yoruichi walked to the wall on the other side of the room beside the mirror and punched it a few times. She watched a few chunks of the brick fall to the ground and then remembered the injury to her back. Feeling around, she only found the tears in her clothes and what little blood there was around the tears but no permanent damage. She walked over to her bed where Shaolin was now curled up and rocking back and forth. Yoruichi sat on the bed and held out her hand but Shaolin moved away and shivered, making a slight squealing noise and crying again. She hid her face from Yoruichi's view and muffled herself by crying into her knees. Yoruichi lowered her hand and sighed. If the girl didn't want the princess to do anything then she wouldn't but she'd at least stay there until she calmed down. The lavender haired beauty walk to her door and locked it then gently sat back down onto her bed.

Yoruichi began to daydream about her human years when she was about 10 and smiled. She was bossy and hated taking orders from people. She was still like that even now but she was able to catch herself before making a smart-assed remark. Without warning, Shaolin threw herself into Yoruichi's lap, clinging to her kimono and sobbing into her chest. The dark skinned woman's eyes widened in surprise but she sighed, gently wrapping her arms around the upset girl and began a slow rocking from side to side to sooth her. She listened to her mumbled sobs until they turned into faint words. "Mama... Baba... Mama... Baba," she repeated until she drifted off to sleep. Yoruichi continued the gentle rocking until she was sure the girl was asleep. She began smiling to herself but then her eyes widened as reality hit her. She had just saved a human girl. Not only that, this little girl had no home to go back to so she either lived with Yoruichi after convincing her father or she would get eaten by the vampires here. Not only that but if Yoruichi did convince her father, she'd have to take care of Shaolin and take full responsibility for anything she would do.

'What the hell have you gotten yourself into this time, Yoruichi...' She asked herself before laying Shaolin in her bed and pulled the blankets up and under her chin. She sighed and walked over to the the closet that sat by the giant mirror and changed out of her kimono into pajamas and took out the hair ornaments, letting her hair flow freely. Yoruichi walked slowly to the bed and crawled in behind the now soundly sleeping Shaolin. Yoruichi just began to close her eyes when the little girl rolled over and curled into Yoruichi. Smiling, the golden eyed Goddess wrapped her arms gently around the little girl and closed her eyes to sleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Vampire's Pet   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:15 pm

It's nice to see Yorucihi be the wild-eyed one for a change. Though I'm not entirely sure why the Fon's a dressed traditional Japanese clothes.

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