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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:04 pm | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:48 pm | |
| I thought it was a good update. Another chapter where we get to see a little bit of Yoruichi emotionally. I'm excited for the dinner scene, though. | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Thu Jan 06, 2011 5:43 pm | |
| Well, this certainly took uncontainable long. Here is Chapter 4. It would probably be wise to reread, or at least skim over, the first 3 chapters, as it's been a fucking long time since this has been updated. Luckily, now that Good Times is over, updates should come exponentially faster. Even luckier, what constitutes "exponentially faster" basically anything at this point. (This is also the 5000th post. I win Team YoruSoi!) | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Sat Jan 08, 2011 2:31 pm | |
| Awesome chapter! I really liked all of their interaction. It felt completely realistic and everything. ^_^ Can't wait for the next update. | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:43 pm | |
| Chapter 5 is up and running your reading enjoyment. Uhhh...nothing else really to say, really. So..there you go. | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:24 pm | |
| I kind of thought it might go that way. - Spoiler:
Yoruichi would finally say something or make a move and Soifon would think Yoruichi was just toying with her. Which I guess is expected given how Soifon views her relationship with Yoruichi. It just kinda sucks for Yoruichi.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens. And Unohana is scary. | |
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raezura Hollow
Posts : 98 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 30 Location : Sunnydale, California
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:57 pm | |
| God, the end was almost hard to read.
I really like this story. I am very curious to where you might be taking it.
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:58 pm | |
| So here's the thing. Chapter 6 is done. It's ready to go. But, Captain is really close to finishing her seminal Forced Perspective. So, as an added motivation to her, I'm taking Chapter 6 hostage. It will not be released until Captain finished Forced Perspective.
Ball's in your court, Captain. | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:33 am | |
| It worked this time. But don't do that again! Ha ha. | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:43 pm | |
| I don't think you could have asked for two more different updates then theses two. Captain updated Forced Perspective, so here is Chapter 6 as promised. | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:56 pm | |
| I really like the growth in this chapter of Yoruichi. Very well done. ^_^ | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Tue May 24, 2011 3:51 pm | |
| After a crazy long wait, I've finally decided to stop being so goddamn lazy and update this. Chapter 7 | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Wed May 25, 2011 1:26 am | |
| Update! I really enjoy this fic. ^_^ | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:21 pm | |
| Surprise! Chapter 8It's a chapter all about Rei this time! Because I try to treat her like an actual character and not an empty vessel meant to be projected onto. | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Mon Sep 05, 2011 2:59 am | |
| That was a pleasant update. ^_^ I am sure you know why I liked it, but I won't say so that others aren't spoiled before they read it. | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Sun Dec 04, 2011 6:38 pm | |
| Chapter 9I really missed the boat naming this fic. The title should have been something food related. | |
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CaptainYoruichi CaptainYoruichi Level
Posts : 1264 Join date : 2010-05-06 Age : 41 Location : Nerd Palace
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Sun Dec 04, 2011 8:36 pm | |
| So cute. I also quite enjoyed this chapter. As always I look forward to the next update. | |
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SoldierG65434-2 H-H-Hacker
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-05-06 Location : Citadel Station
| Subject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) Thu May 10, 2012 8:03 pm | |
| Hey guys! Remember how I used to write YoruSoi fics? You know, with out the robots and shit? Chapter 10I make mention of my use of Tumblr for ANs now. In case you are not a user, I've put a link in my sig that you can use. Happy early birthday, Captain. | |
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