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PostSubject: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 7:04 pm

It's been a long time coming, but I've finally uploaded the next chapter of Every Time I Make a Girl Cry. I hope that this chapter is worth the wait, though I have my doubts.

Chapter 3

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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyTue Jul 13, 2010 11:48 pm

I thought it was a good update. Another chapter where we get to see a little bit of Yoruichi emotionally.

I'm excited for the dinner scene, though. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyThu Jan 06, 2011 5:43 pm

Well, this certainly took uncontainable long. Here is Chapter 4. It would probably be wise to reread, or at least skim over, the first 3 chapters, as it's been a fucking long time since this has been updated.

Luckily, now that Good Times is over, updates should come exponentially faster. Even luckier, what constitutes "exponentially faster" basically anything at this point.

(This is also the 5000th post. I win Team YoruSoi!)

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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptySat Jan 08, 2011 2:31 pm

Awesome chapter! I really liked all of their interaction. It felt completely realistic and everything. ^_^ Can't wait for the next update.
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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyMon Jan 24, 2011 7:43 pm

Chapter 5 is up and running your reading enjoyment.

Uhhh...nothing else really to say, really. So..there you go.

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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyMon Jan 24, 2011 9:24 pm

I kind of thought it might go that way.

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Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.

And Unohana is scary.
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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyMon Jan 24, 2011 10:57 pm

God, the end was almost hard to read.

I really like this story. I am very curious to where you might be taking it.

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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyWed Feb 23, 2011 7:58 pm

So here's the thing. Chapter 6 is done. It's ready to go. But, Captain is really close to finishing her seminal Forced Perspective. So, as an added motivation to her, I'm taking Chapter 6 hostage. It will not be released until Captain finished Forced Perspective.

Ball's in your court, Captain.

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It worked this time. Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) 839403 But don't do that again! Ha ha.
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I don't think you could have asked for two more different updates then theses two.

Captain updated Forced Perspective, so here is Chapter 6 as promised.

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I really like the growth in this chapter of Yoruichi. Very well done. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyTue May 24, 2011 3:51 pm

After a crazy long wait, I've finally decided to stop being so goddamn lazy and update this.

Chapter 7

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Update! Adore I really enjoy this fic. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptySun Sep 04, 2011 8:21 pm

Surprise!

Chapter 8

It's a chapter all about Rei this time! Because I try to treat her like an actual character and not an empty vessel meant to be projected onto.

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PostSubject: Re: Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+)   Every Time I Make a Girl Cry (18+) EmptyMon Sep 05, 2011 2:59 am

That was a pleasant update. ^_^ I am sure you know why I liked it, but I won't say so that others aren't spoiled before they read it.
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Chapter 9

I really missed the boat naming this fic. The title should have been something food related.

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So cute. I also quite enjoyed this chapter. As always I look forward to the next update.
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Hey guys! Remember how I used to write YoruSoi fics? You know, with out the robots and shit?

Chapter 10

I make mention of my use of Tumblr for ANs now. In case you are not a user, I've put a link in my sig that you can use.

Happy early birthday, Captain.

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