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PostSubject: Forced Perspective   Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:48 pm

Most of you have already read this update since I posted it in the FC at BA. But just in case you missed it, or wanted to re-read it, here is chapter 15.

I'm Alive.

I feel that I should mention that Joy and I broke the pattern of her writing odd numbered chapters and me writing even numbered chapters. I wrote chapter 15. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:50 pm

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Still Alive.

This was a triumph! I'm making a note here, huge success! It's hard to overstate my satisfaction!
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Wed Mar 02, 2011 2:25 am

Ok the good news is that I finally finished the last chapter! Yeah! I have to get Joy to read it, approve it, and post it on ffnet, though.
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:15 am

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Ok the good news is that I finally finished the last chapter! Yeah! I have to get Joy to read it, approve it, and post it on ffnet, though.
Good, now leave that chapter at the door and back away slowly. Just be cool and no one has to get hurt.

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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:12 pm

Ok the chapter is up, not titled because Joy forgot what I wanted for the title, which is "Today Was a Fairytale" for what should be obvious reasons.

Final Chapter!

Now it's your turn to post your chapter, Soldier. cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:48 pm

You know, for all the things you two did right through this fic, I think the best thing you did was managing to maintain how sinister a character Urahara can be. Even though he was mostly there for laughs, the fact remains that the underlying premise of the Urahara's plans is really messed up, and I appreciate the fact that Urahara was able to maintain his underlying shadyness, even in a predominately fluffy fic.

I like that fact so much that I'm willing got forgive the sakura grove.

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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:55 pm

I had that part written before we decided the sakura grove was cliche, for what it's worth. I mean literally, I had everything up to where they were eating done several months ago, and the last thing I had to write was the last half page.
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:33 pm

Read it, loved it and I will definitely write you a review once I find the time.

I was actually a little surprised by the end, which was nice.
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:42 pm

Really? I figured it being fluffy was expected. XD I'm definitely interested in hearing your thoughts on it. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:58 am

The fluff wasn't surprising, that was a given. It was more the way it was presented that surprised me. Either I made this up in my head or I correctly remember you posting ages ago an excerpt of this chapter and it being slightly different. I think I just had that in my head and then when I read this and it was different once Sui-Feng got back to Soul Society, it threw me for a moment.

It definitely threw me in a good way, it was nice to have a surprise, especially since I thought I had it all figured out.
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PostSubject: Re: Forced Perspective   Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:33 pm

Oh, I remember that now! Yeah, I did post part of it a long time ago. It was something to tide everyone over until Joy finished chapter 15 (which never happened and I ended up doing it). And then I changed it for the final version. So yeah, it is different from the excerpt I posted a long time ago. Damn, you have a good memory.

On another note, a lot of people seem to think that the story is still going. Should I write an epilogue or something?
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