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PostSubject: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Thu May 20, 2010 2:33 pm

I'll be posting running updates for my fic The Good Times are Killing Me here. You can also discuss the fic here as well.

My first update on this site will be Chapter 17

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sat May 22, 2010 8:02 pm

How many more chapters are you planning?
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sat May 22, 2010 8:07 pm

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How many more chapters are you planning?
IT all dependes on which plot arc I chooses from here. I'm leaning towards the shorter, not crushingly depressing one.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sun May 23, 2010 12:35 pm

Good update - like the chapter!
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sun May 23, 2010 12:36 pm

SoldierG65434-2 wrote:

IT all dependes on which plot arc I chooses from here. I'm leaning towards the shorter, not crushingly depressing one.

Well, you know I would prefer the not crushingly depressing one. XD
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sun May 23, 2010 7:11 pm

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Well, you know I would prefer the not crushingly depressing one. XD
Yeah, I'm not going ot use the soul crushingly depressing plot.

I was thinking about it, and the depressing plot would actually shorten the fic quite a bit. However, it would potentially be the single most depressing YoruSoi ending ever. Not angsty, just dispair inducingly sad.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sun May 23, 2010 9:37 pm

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CaptainYoruichi wrote:

Well, you know I would prefer the not crushingly depressing one. XD
Yeah, I'm not going ot use the soul crushingly depressing plot.

I was thinking about it, and the depressing plot would actually shorten the fic quite a bit. However, it would potentially be the single most depressing YoruSoi ending ever. Not angsty, just dispair inducingly sad.

yeah... I'm going to ask you not to do that to me please.
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Wed May 26, 2010 7:51 pm

That makes me curious on what the depressing ending would be. It makes me hopefully suggest that you'd write an alternative ending, even though it'd only be more work. However, I hope you think about it please.

Other than that, you're doing a great job on that fic Soldier.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Thu May 27, 2010 8:53 pm

Nice chapter
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Thu May 27, 2010 8:53 pm

Nice chapter
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Thu May 27, 2010 11:42 pm

Shayleen wrote:
That makes me curious on what the depressing ending would be. It makes me hopefully suggest that you'd write an alternative ending, even though it'd only be more work. However, I hope you think about it please.

I figured someone would ask about it. I'm glad, because I would be tempted to use it if I didn't tell anybody. Here's a quick rundown of the what the depressing ending would have been:

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 1:41 am

Oh yes. That's very angsty. I love it haha. I can say I enjoy bad endings when the story deserves it. And with how your story is so far, it can go either way comfortably (for me). Thanks for the spoiler! =] I really enjoyed it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 2:07 am

Oh, I have to say I would be very depressed if you did end it that way.
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 6:23 am

Wow, that would be a depressing ending. Is it bad that I would laugh?

And now I want to know what is the most sexually depraved thing Yoruichi has done.
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 12:28 pm

I can't help think something as bad as two girls one cup bad...but I think that's as bad as you can get so I won't jump to conclusions
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 12:39 pm

Shayleen wrote:
I can't help think something as bad as two girls one cup bad...but I think that's as bad as you can get so I won't jump to conclusions

Oh god no! Nothing that bad.

Honestly, I hadn't given it much thought. I figured that I would figure it out when the time came. All I knew is that it would involve her time us sex addiction rehab where she was confined with sex addicts.

Sorry to dissapoint.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 1:14 pm

SoldierG65434-2 wrote:
Oh god no! Nothing that bad.

epic.

honestly, there are worse things. the alternative ending seems depressing enough to get me down. which is why im glad youre not gonna go that way. unless our reactions to it is gonna drive you to writing it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri May 28, 2010 7:17 pm

Haha I just tried to imagine the worse thing and that's the first thing that popped up. I'm glad it wasn't that extreme so you didn't dissapoint but relieved me.

Hmmm well, I still can't wait for the next chapter. Now I'm wondering how a nice ending will come out of it haha.

Good writing Soldier. It actually gives us readers something to muse about. *thumbs up*
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:54 pm

Here's Chapter 18 and Chapter 19.

You know, as much as I've come to dislike this fic, I have to say that it has my favorite Yoruichi out of the ones I've written, and that's probably because she bears little resemblance to her manga progenitor. She's emotive and needy. But most importantly, she straddles a line between completely broken and repulsive that makes her endearing to me.

It's also nice to see Yoruichi as the broken one in need of emotional rescue for a change.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:57 pm

I'm glad they talked it out a bit. ^_^ I really hope they are able to come up with something that works for both of them.
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:47 pm

Here it is, Polaris, Chapter 20.

I hope it's worth the wait.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri Jun 25, 2010 10:46 pm

This soooooo ironic!! I've been following this on fanfiction.net since chapter 10 was released!! I never knew the author was on here!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Fri Jun 25, 2010 10:50 pm

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This soooooo ironic!! I've been following this on fanfiction.net since chapter 10 was released!! I never knew the author was on here!!
That's not really ironic, it's coincidental. And kind of troubling, since I'm a rather public figure int he YoruSoi community and I use the same name for everything.

Anyway, hope you have been enjoying the fic. That's why I write them, save for a couple.

Feel free to tell me what you think and leave suggestions or start discussions. That's why this tread is here.

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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Sun Jun 27, 2010 5:15 am

I think that it is incredibly (sp?) well written and utterly wonderful! Everything just seems to flow nicely together and happen at a pace that is able to be believable. I love how you are able to make them seem so out of character, while still seem slightly in character all at once!!
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PostSubject: Re: The Good Times are Killing Me (18+)   Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:46 am

Im a big fan of the story. I have been sense chapter 1. I can tell that this is far from one of your own favorite stories by the way you talk about it. But please give it the credit it desirves and dont rush the ending. All the fans are realy looking forward to it. (Thats right you have fans. >:] )
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