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PostSubject: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySat May 15, 2010 11:20 pm

I'm going to show you people exactly what everyone else will see when they go into this fic.

Quarrels

Rating: T

Genere: Drama/Romance

Characters: Yoruichi & Urahara

Description: Every relationship has issues that need to be worked out.


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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySat May 15, 2010 11:39 pm

Well played, sir. :D

But on a serious note, I can totally see that being Yoruichi's reason for everything.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 12:09 am

Hehe good one - loved Urahara in this one =)
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 1:42 am

Spoiler:

I thought it was a really good concept, and very plausible.

Spoiler:

Anyway, job well done.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 11:01 am

siyentista wrote:
Spoiler:
That line about being "considered" was in reference to the fact that eventhough Urahara and Yoruichi had been in exile together, Yoruichi was still after the woman who had tried to kill her after they were reunitedshe hadn't seen for a centruy.

Well, it should be obvious to everyone that I wrote this fic to mess with YoruHara. I'm pleased to announce that I've gotten my first angry reveiw!

Annon wrote:
this stupidest thing i read. soifong sycophant's only thing you got right yoru saves kisuke 'cos she love him, and she no les

I hope this isn't one of you leacing a prank reveiw, becuase it made my day to think that this was a YoruHAra shippers repsonse.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 11:04 am

i saw that. we've been laughing about it in the chatbox. you had the good humor to call soi a sycophant in your own fic despite who you ship, and they make fun of soi all the time, but this person can't take a logical explanation of how yoruichi might be angry at kisuke?

the morale thing was kinda harsh, btw, but i like it all the same.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 12:08 pm

No, I didn't leave that review. XD. But that sounds like what I thought they would say, complete with a little bit of shorthand (I'm assuming "les" is short for lesbian).
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 12:50 pm

oh, is that what it meant? i thought is was "less", and i totally couldn't make sense of the sentence, what with the lack of punctuations and all.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 5:08 pm

I didn't leave it either.
It always amuses me how immature people become when it is about their ships about drawn characters *facepalm*
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 5:10 pm

Azley wrote:
I didn't leave it either.
It always amuses me how immature people become when it is about their ships about drawn characters *facepalm*

IT amuses me to no end as well. Of course, I've lost faith in humanity, so I have to make my own fun.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySun May 16, 2010 10:41 pm

I think it was a wonderful fic. It's a side to their friendship that we never see and you brought it to light.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptyThu May 27, 2010 8:51 pm

Nice fic
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptyTue Jun 15, 2010 12:22 am

This is mildly disheartening. I wrote this fic to get a rise out of the YoruHara community, not change their minds! Here's a review I just got.

Shadow Countess wrote:
I would love to say that this is epic, cause it is, but it kind of broke my heart somewhere along the plot. I've always loved the idea of Kisuke and Yoruichi being a couple cause I've always seen them together, but with your fics, I'm straying more and more to a Soifon x Yoruichi pairing. Still, the words she said to him, they make so much sense yet are so harsh. I pity him.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptyTue Jun 15, 2010 1:18 am

I think that's pretty cool, myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptyTue Jun 15, 2010 8:05 am

That was freaked up Soldier, but still, Bravo! And here I thought you were going to fuck up the YoruSoi fandom! Well, from the title, that's how I thought things would go. Great writing, still a few typos (I spotted two) but nobody cares about those anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptyTue Jun 15, 2010 11:55 am

CaptainYoruichi wrote:
I think that's pretty cool, myself.

It is cool in it's own way, but I feel like I failed as an artists. My work did not convey the intended message.

But I guess in the end I still won, since I seem to have converted someone.

Speaking of artists failing; I realized something mind-blowing about this fic.

Those of you who have published don FF.net probably know that if you check your story stats under the traffic tab, you can see how many and which communities (C2s) any of your fics are in.

Now, every single one of my fics is in a community (Lovin' From The Ladies) but a handful of them are in 2.

Quarrels is one of my fics that's in 2.

Curious, I checked to see what the other community was. I come to find that it's a community by the name of Complicity.

It's a fucking YoruHara community.

Goddamn...I wrote this fic to fuck with YoruHara, but this fic is fucking with me!


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PostSubject: Re: Quarrels   Quarrels EmptySat Jun 19, 2010 6:22 am

hahaha i dont know why, but i love the fact that your fic is fucking with you. I think the only thing that can top that is if your fic was mentioned (with high regards) in BA's YoruHara FC!
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